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    Icon1 Who I Was Before

    I wrote this song last night. It really means a lot to me. When I was thirteen someone I loved left to be in a better place. Ever since then I have not been myself. Each day, it feels like I am a different person. Like I don't know my own self at all. This song is basically saying. That I need to find my real self, but I am just too scared to see who I was before.

    Who I Was Before


    I can't remember how long I felt this way
    It feels like I am miles away
    I got so caught up in yesterday
    Am I just a couple of steps away?

    CHORUS: I need to find who I was before
    I got lost in this whole world
    And forgot who I am
    Could it be I am not that far?
    I've got to get back in touch with her

    All these questions
    Is making my head spin
    "What if I never make it?"
    "What if I turn away?"
    A voice inside my head
    Tells me "Don't wait!"
    Every step I am taking
    Seems lost with no direction

    Chorus

    I got lost in this whole world
    And forgot who I am
    I need to find who I was before


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    Default Re: Who I Was Before

    Zoey that is amazing!


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    Default Re: Who I Was Before

    Wow, nice song! I know how it feels to lose someone or an animal close to you. Very nice song.

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    Default Re: Who I Was Before

    Really awesome song Zoey! Sounds great! =)
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    Default Re: Who I Was Before

    It's really good! My only criticism is that this is a really short song. I suggest another verse or repeating the chorus lol. Other than that it's sweet!

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