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    Default Swimming. (A true story)

    Swimming
    By Ella Sparkleflower.


    Her body was wet, wet of sweat. Her heart was beating and pounding as loud as a bullhorn

    The pressure in her eyes, The pose she made. Crouched, ready to pounce.

    The anouncer said "Ready!?"

    She was ready.

    The anouncer said "Set!?"

    She was set.

    The Anouncer said "GO!!"

    And she pounced, With a huge and elegant splash of water, she swam.

    Her body worked and worked, beside her a friend, beside her an enemy. She glared and swam.

    She swam fasted than a bullet, whip-lashing lap to lap.



    Finally, she reached the finish after a long day.

    When the anouncer said "WINNER IS NUMBER 36!!!" It was all worth it.


    So was her life of swimming.






    Well? Like it? Its how i felt yesterday at my swim meet.

    Last edited by Ella Sparkleflower; 08-04-2010 at 11:00 PM.

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    Default Re: Swimming. (A true story)

    Nice (Real) Story! So you really did win? Congrats!
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    Default Re: Swimming. (A true story)

    That was nice

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    Thats awesome!!!!
    You must be great at swimming (:

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    Thanks guys!! And yes, I am great at swimming, i make 5 laps at My pool every day at about 6:00 am. I have 5 hour long swim meets every Tuesday.

    Yes, i won

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    i loved your use of line breaks! very well done and congrats on wining!
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    It was made a long time ago, people weren't as smart back then... That's my only answer.

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    thats really cool and congratz on winning. *fire works go off* yay!

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    Great story, very emotive, and gratz on the win!



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    nice story and congrats! and lucky you have a swimming pool!

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    Aww!! Thank you all!

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