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    Icon12 My Story: Should I make it a movie?

    The mist in the air was warm, it was just about dawn. Islowly open my eyes, tired from the events that occurred last night. My motherand father were talking outside to someone who came to our doorstep. He was atall man, probably around six and a half feet. He had a large briefcase in hishands. My mom and he were talking in hushed tones while my father stood aboutthree feet away. My mom nodded her head and the guy walked in the house. Heknocked on my door and I had told him to come in.
    He crackedopen the door and tried to start a conversation. I sat there and stared at him,he was a shifty looking man. He narrowed his eyes and said, “Look, kid. Yourparents sold you to me, your mine now. Come with me.” He grabbed my hand,yanking me out of my room. I screamed out to my mother, she turned around anddidn’t face me. I cry for help, no one cared. I was thrown in his van and wasdriven to his house. I had fell asleep on my journey, crying myself to sleep onthe torn backseat.
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    Post if it should be a movie!
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    Default Re: My Story: Should I make it a movie?

    add more to it, and you got a film! if you edit the part about the buyer being a guy and make him a girl, you have an actoress right here! i have been in 59+ videos

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    Default Re: My Story: Should I make it a movie?

    Ill consider the idea about the buyer being a girl, thank you for the idea. I will pm you when I get to the stage of practice.


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    Default Re: My Story: Should I make it a movie?

    sounds awesome, if i knew your IGN i would add you

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    Default Re: My Story: Should I make it a movie?

    I love it! It would be awesome to see this as a movie! I love the dramatic plot. Keep on writing it, it's golden. c;

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    Default Re: My Story: Should I make it a movie?

    Add some more and it would be the perfect movie!

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    Default Re: My Story: Should I make it a movie?

    Quote Originally Posted by Cori goldensea View Post
    sounds awesome, if i knew your IGN i would add you
    My IGN is Bröken.
    But I prefer to have people add my alt
    Silvia Burningtracker.

    Thanks for the feedback!


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