Play Free Realms NowJoin Free Realms Insider

Results 1 to 4 of 4
  1. #1
    Knight's Avatar
    Knight is offline Amateur Gamer
    Join Date
    Jul 2010
    Posts
    286

    Default My Role Play Story

    Name: Jacob Silverhills
    Neighberhood:Santcuary
    Age:9
    Gender: Male The Story:
    Once there was this this little 9 year old named Jacob.He loved his Ninja job.He had all the Jonin Untill this bully came up and took his jonin clothes. He had alot more pairs but he had on the color" Blue" his favorite color was stolen.His little other friend Willam the maxed ninja.They have been friends since the first day of Ninja class.So Jacob asked Willam to fight him. He said yes. So it was Willam's first fight. They swinged the swords, clashed them, And the bully got a cut Because.... Go to my Threads for more.
    "The most painful goodbyes are the ones that are never said and never explained."
    - (not sure saw it in a picture)

  2. #2
    Inua's Avatar
    Inua is offline Master Gamer
    Join Date
    May 2010
    Posts
    4,435

    Default Re: My Role Play Story

    You should add more detail, other then that it's a nice story. ^^;
    Each Event is preceded by Prophecy. But without the hero, there is no Event.

  3. #3
    Knight's Avatar
    Knight is offline Amateur Gamer
    Join Date
    Jul 2010
    Posts
    286

    Default Re: My Role Play Story

    Ok i am making changes peoplez.
    "The most painful goodbyes are the ones that are never said and never explained."
    - (not sure saw it in a picture)

  4. #4
    Princess Celestina's Avatar
    Princess Celestina is offline Master Gamer
    Join Date
    Mar 2010
    Posts
    10,141

    Default Re: My Role Play Story

    I agree with Inua. It's a great start, but it could use a teensy weensy bit more of detail!

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •