My poem :) hope you like it

[Katie Sapphireriver1]

A pierced heart:
Best say im sorry. Problems and issues are left to the past.
But over stretched covers are not hiding the way i feel for you.
A lover lost. A new friend gained. Im mourning because of what i thought
would help me. But has my results improved? No. I can hear peopled voices
telling me where i went wrong. May not care or do you? But deep in me i never really stopped thinking about you much. Now you probably dont see my face as a treasure to love. All i caused you was pain. For my own needs. I was selfish. I am sorry what i. This confused girl has done. But pierced a heart. So now you and i should move on. All we have now are memories. So cherish them. While they last.

Thanks for reading my poem will write more maybe

[ramsy]

Thats decent. Practice makes perfect, keep it up!

[Inua]

*nods* I agree.

[Rigante Seafallen]

-Double nods- :]

[Unholy Deus]

Thats pretty good

[Lottie Wolfhaven]

This is really good.