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Title: My poem :) hope you like it
- 12-14-2010, 05:29 PM #1
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My poem :) hope you like it
A pierced heart:
Best say im sorry. Problems and issues are left to the past.
But over stretched covers are not hiding the way i feel for you.
A lover lost. A new friend gained. Im mourning because of what i thought
would help me. But has my results improved? No. I can hear peopled voices
telling me where i went wrong. May not care or do you? But deep in me i never really stopped thinking about you much. Now you probably dont see my face as a treasure to love. All i caused you was pain. For my own needs. I was selfish. I am sorry what i. This confused girl has done. But pierced a heart. So now you and i should move on. All we have now are memories. So cherish them. While they last.
Thanks for reading my poemwill write more maybe
- 01-11-2011, 06:52 AM #2
Re: My poem :) hope you like it
Thats decent. Practice makes perfect, keep it up!
- 01-11-2011, 06:58 AM #3
Re: My poem :) hope you like it
*nods* I agree.
Each Event is preceded by Prophecy. But without the hero, there is no Event.
- 01-14-2011, 04:04 PM #4
Re: My poem :) hope you like it
-Double nods- :]
Paint me a melody
Dream me another lullaby
- 01-20-2011, 11:08 PM #5
Re: My poem :) hope you like it
Thats pretty good
No Turning Back Now...
- 02-13-2011, 11:16 AM #6
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This is really good.