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    Icon1 My poem :) hope you like it

    A pierced heart:
    Best say im sorry. Problems and issues are left to the past.
    But over stretched covers are not hiding the way i feel for you.
    A lover lost. A new friend gained. Im mourning because of what i thought
    would help me. But has my results improved? No. I can hear peopled voices
    telling me where i went wrong. May not care or do you? But deep in me i never really stopped thinking about you much. Now you probably dont see my face as a treasure to love. All i caused you was pain. For my own needs. I was selfish. I am sorry what i. This confused girl has done. But pierced a heart. So now you and i should move on. All we have now are memories. So cherish them. While they last.

    Thanks for reading my poem will write more maybe

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    Default Re: My poem :) hope you like it

    Thats decent. Practice makes perfect, keep it up!

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    Default Re: My poem :) hope you like it

    *nods* I agree.
    Each Event is preceded by Prophecy. But without the hero, there is no Event.

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    Default Re: My poem :) hope you like it

    -Double nods- :]

    Paint me a melody
    Dream me another lullaby


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    Default Re: My poem :) hope you like it

    Thats pretty good
    No Turning Back Now...

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    Default Re: My poem :) hope you like it

    This is really good.

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