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    Default There once was a beautiful limerick

    Almost like the title suggests, come in and share a limerick! (that you have created) or if ya want share a haiku or a tanka (limericks preferred!)

    Remember the syllable formula!

    Limerick:
    7-10 (rhymes with line 2 & 5)
    7-10 (rhymes with line 1 & 5)
    5-7 (rhymes with line 4)
    5-7 (rhymes with line 3)
    7-10 (rhymes with line 1 & 2)

    Haiku:
    5,7,5 (there are other ways it can go but you would have to look them up.)

    Tanka:
    5,7,5,7,7

    ok here is one I made up (don't laugh pleeease)

    AHEM:

    There once lived a man in a shoe ( 8 )
    Who always seemed very blue (7)
    Then he met a small girl (6)
    That gave him a pearl (5)
    And he finally got a clue ( 8 )

    That's a weak one...but yea...limericks usually have a shocking or surprising ending that packs a punch so show us what ya got!

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    Default Re: There once was a beautiful limerick

    Huh here's one:

    A beautiful girl went to school
    Everyone thought she was cool
    But she picked her nose
    And chewed on her toes
    Then went and peed in the pool

    pretty bad lol

    u said it should have like a surprise ending so let's see this:

    A beautiful girl went to school
    Everyone thought she was cool
    She was pretty and nice
    Filled with sugar and spice
    But she went and peed in the pool...idk
    Last edited by starmoth; 05-27-2009 at 05:36 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

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    Default Re: There once was a beautiful limerick

    Heres mine

    There once was a man named Steve
    Who did things no one could believe
    But he got in one bad fight
    In the middle of the night
    So they told him to leave

    Power to the Irish!
    Before you insult someone, walk a mile in their shoes
    That way, your a mile away and you have their shoes


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    Default Re: There once was a beautiful limerick

    great poetry guys! ill try to get one up soon!

    Be yourself.. Imitation is Suicide!

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    Default Re: There once was a beautiful limerick

    ok this is a Haiku:

    Its hot in Summer (5)
    And no one likes it hot now (7)
    And sometimes its cool (5)

    thank you thank you
    Im back! :3

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