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    Default Just say no poem

    Hey! Here is a poem that I came up with to prevent young people from doing drugs, enjoy!!
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    Good-bye
    I looked at her and she looked at me and I knew that this wouldn't go so easily,
    Her lips were cracked,
    Her face was pale,
    Her eyes were slits merely floating in mid-air.
    Her voice was soft, a whisper at that.
    She whispered out my name,
    She summened to me to the wall,
    So she wouldn't be alone when she took the fall.
    She coughed, she gagged and then she was gone,
    She left with me on knees crying why oh why must this happen to me.
    But before she was gone,
    Before she took the fall,
    I whispered so softly, almost glued to the wall.
    I said " Don't worry mom, I won't let this happen to me,
    I promise to stay drug-free, just for you mommy."

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    That is amazing. It almost made me cry. With the little twist at the end of how the person dying was his mom. This'll always be in my mind:

    I said " Don't worry mom, I won't let this happen to me,
    I promise to stay drug-free, just for you mommy."

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    Thanks! I came up with it too late to enter it in our poem contest for the classes we are taking on it ..... but I just wanted to see what other people thought!

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    Yeah. It is pretty serious. You no doubt would have won the contest.

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    Thanks! You wouldn't think that a person as jumpy as me could do something so serious .... if you asked some of my friends .... let's say 5 of them .... only 1 would say that I could! Amazing, isn't it? Yea, the guy that one the contest wrote about how drugs are bad and get you in jail. I on the other hand talked about something more personal .... no, I have not had such and expirance, I just take heartbreak and take it to how I would feel if I was in the situation.

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    Yeah. You'll probably be a famous poet when you're older.

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    I was aiming towards either a poet or an author .... no, not my diaries =]
    I've done another poem .... I'll post it in a minute!

    Here are two ..... actually!!! You're very lucky
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    Sadness Inside
    They mock and make fun
    You feel hotter than the sun.
    They ignore you, they snicker,
    Then sadness grows and your hope flickers.
    For you regret ever trying,
    Because all you do is end up crying.
    Life gets harder,
    You want to go ****her.
    But you are crying,
    Too hard to try flying.
    They don't realize
    How they make you hurt inside.
    Oh the hurt! Oh the hurt! They make your heart cry.
    Your heart just wants to scream
    Oh the sadness inside!
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    What Best Friends Do
    She cries, she is sad
    But you can tell she is mad.
    By the way she says she's fine,
    You can tell she is on a thin line.
    She never knows, for she cries and flops,
    But you act like a mop.
    You comfort, you dry
    While she sniffles and crys.
    She looks at you
    And says thank you.
    You say not a problem,
    It's what best friends do.
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    Seasons ( give you more for less! )
    The autumn breaze
    Flowing oh so easily.
    Turns into a winters chill
    Spread evenly in the air, to where it fills.
    Winter turns into spring,
    Oh joy! Oh joy! Let us celebrate and sing!
    Spring turns into summer,
    Oh the hotter, the funner!

    Where it *** out .... I put ****her.

    Far ... that's what I put.
    Last edited by Soccerchamp098; 05-23-2008 at 09:01 PM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

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