In your reach (poem/song)

[jill97]

My heart on yours,
Hand in hand,
In your reach,
Is where i stand,
Not too close,
Not too far,
Not a wound,
Not a scar,
Held me gently,
Like a butterfly,
i promised to stay,
And never to lie,
You promised to hold me,
Next to you,
And when you cry,
Promise i will too,
When you leave,
I will follow,
Because without you,
My heart is hollow,
You gave me my wings,
I gave you my heart,
And now that we're together,
We won't ever be apart,
Because we're not too close,
We're not too far,
We sing the same song,
Wish apon the same star,
And when a word,
Took me by suprise,
Its all cured,
Once i look in your eyes,
In your reach,
Is where i'll be,
Till the moment,
When you can not see,
through the tears that flood,
At the base of our eyes,
Because this final end,
Has taken us both by suprise.


Like it?

[Eladwodahs Alim]

That's good. It is sad at the end, but good.

Also, I really like your avi

[Pilar]

I really like it .

[Zoey Cleversong]

Wow... I have to agree, it's sad but it's very good! Keep writing!

[jill97]

Cool guys thx! i like wrote it in two seconds, then read it over and i was like WOW Did i do that?? Lol

[Brandon Ironarrow]

Wow to bad I didn't have a drummer and bass guitar plus a lead guiter. If I did I would sing it and post it on youtube and like tell EVERYONE that it was written by you! 8D (And if I had a youtube account >_<) You keep on writting this stuff cause you do great at it!!! I don't see many good poets in my life but out of all the poets I have seen so far you are by far the best!


Sincerely, Brandon Ironarrow

[jill97]

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD LOl *HAPPINESS* woot! Thx brandon!! )))))

[dmpdm]

I love it !! Very nice

[free realm]

i love it it was cool