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    Default Wishful-A Novel by Lilianne Starshine

    Prolouge

    I have just one thing to say to you.
    Be careful what you wish for, because it might just come true...

    Chapter 1
    Hi.
    The name's Lilianne. Lilianne Starshine.
    Most people just call me Lily.
    You wouldn't believe what I have been through the past few months.
    Want to know?
    This is all true, but whether you believe me or not is up to you.
    My story starts out like this...

    It was a beautiful Saturday morning, just the right weather for some beach time with my buds at Seaside. I had everything ready.
    Swim Suit? Check
    Sunscreen? Check
    Cute guys? Maybe...
    I have to admit it, I am in love with the beach. I can't explain it. It's just that whenever I feel the sand beneath my feet, a calm feeling just settles over me. The feeling of the sun on my back, sand between my toes, hearing the ocean steadily lap against the shore has me under its spell. I could live at the beach forever, never needing anything but the my surfboard and those waves.
    Waves.
    That's how it all began.
    Just one wave.
    One wish.
    I could go on with the details, but that would take to long.
    As I was saying, I had everything I needed, all that was left to do was meet up with my friends and hit the beach! I was excited.
    But that's because I didn't know what was about to come...


    Well that's it for now! What do you think?
    I am currently working on another Chapter, and I will gladly welcome ideas if you have any!

    Thanks for reading!
    My first crush was in 1st grade...Dun remember who, but it was probably one of the Wiggles or something xD
    -Princess Claire, aka my crazy yet lovable sissy (:

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    Default Re: Wishful-A Novel by Lilianne Starshine

    Ooh! I can't wait for chapter 2!! ^^,
    Make new friends, but keep the old. One is silver, the other is gold.

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    Default Re: Wishful-A Novel by Lilianne Starshine

    Chapter 2

    As I arrived at Seaside, I got the feeling I was being watched. I turned around and looked around myself, wondering who-or what-was watching me.
    Probably a bird I thought to myself.
    I soon caught up with my buds and we headed to our favorite spot.
    As we were walking, I noticed some strange men leaning against one of the nearby shops.
    They wore a dark coats and hats, and I thought I saw a glint of red eyes beneath their hats.
    "Strange." I murmured to myself. But then again, a lot of people wore red contacts in Sacred Grove, so I guess there wasn't anything to worry about.
    Boy how wrong was I.
    After my friends and I reached our spot, I laid out my towel and sat down on it.
    Ahh I thought to myself. This is the life.
    I pulled out the sunscreen from my bag and put some on before passing it around for my friends to use.
    The guys my friends brought along grabbed there surfboards and headed out for the waves. I sat back and watched, laughing every once in a while as every one of them fell off there surfboards, and resurfaced, a goofy grin on their faces.
    Just then, the biggest wave I had ever seen appeared right before my eyes.
    "What the..." I gasped, sitting bolt upright.
    My friend were laughing and clapping their hands with delight, while the guys headed straight for the wave.
    That wave does not look natural I thought to myself.
    That's when I noticed the strange men cackling and that's when I got a real good look at them.
    They all had green skin, glinting red eyes, and fangs that would make a vampire go crying for mama.
    No...way...
    My head was spinning.
    Who were these men? And what were they doing here?
    Then it hit me.
    The creatures were all staring at the wave, and with each cackle of glee the wave grew bigger...and bigger...
    These creatures were creating the wave.
    I had to do something, before my friends got hurt.
    "Stop it!" I screamed as I ran toward them.
    They all turned to me, and their grins grew bigger.
    "You shall be next!" They cackled.
    I stopped short.
    Their voices sounded like metal scraping against metal.
    And another thing. When you hear them speak, it seems like everything just slows down, like time itself has stopped.
    I couldn't move. I could barely breath. All I could do is watch, as the creatures waved their hands, and my friends all disappeared under the wave.
    And that's when everything went black.

    Well that's it for now! More coming soon!
    My first crush was in 1st grade...Dun remember who, but it was probably one of the Wiggles or something xD
    -Princess Claire, aka my crazy yet lovable sissy (:

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    Default Re: Wishful-A Novel by Lilianne Starshine

    Great Novel, Keep writing, I love reading it!!

    Do Chapter 3 already!!

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    Default Re: Wishful-A Novel by Lilianne Starshine

    yea. hey soph did you read my story?

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    Default Re: Wishful-A Novel by Lilianne Starshine

    Lol thanks for the comments you guys!

    Btw I only do one chapter a day lol.
    My first crush was in 1st grade...Dun remember who, but it was probably one of the Wiggles or something xD
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    Default Re: Wishful-A Novel by Lilianne Starshine

    Awwww. I want to see more! LOL

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