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    Default Whispers in the Wind

    Hey, guys!
    I decided to make another poem to express myself.
    Thank you, Ivis Windlace, for encouraging me to write one!
    Ok, anyways, here goes:

    Whispers in the Wind

    What's that? That sound in the Wind?
    Someone whispering, perhaps?
    What are They saying?
    It is unknown -- a mystery rather.
    For no one knows but the One who speaks into the Wind.
    As the breeze blows, our ears follow with curiosity.
    Fallen leaves rustle lightly.
    Our eyes dart towards the direction of the noise.
    No one is there.
    Whoosh!
    The Wind makes its getaway.
    We chase the Wind with anxiety;
    We wish to know the secrets that lie within the Wind!
    But nay -- the Wind is too fast.
    The mystery of the whispers in the Wind stays a mystery forevermore.

    Hope you guys liked it!
    I worked really hard on it.
    Last edited by Princess Celestina; 03-27-2011 at 12:24 PM.

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    Oh, and I forgot to say I'm not finished with it.

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    Default Re: Whispers in the Wind

    I think it's a wonderful start. Takes some serious guts to put it out there, and I, for one, appreciate it - thanks for sharing it with us!

    I have some ideas to put past you -- I'll PM you with details...

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    You're welcome!
    And thanks for commenting on this! I need some critique.
    And, ok, I'll go check my inbox.

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    That's a good start indeed.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ivis View Post
    I think it's a wonderful start. Takes some serious guts to put it out there, and I, for one, appreciate it - thanks for sharing it with us!

    I have some ideas to put past you -- I'll PM you with details...
    I agree with Ivis really great job!^-^
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    Thank you very much, Jimi and Jen!
    That really means a lot to me.
    I'm still working on the poem.

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    Like the poem! Its nice to see someone finally make a poem that doesn't ryhme. Because sometimes your poems can't ryhme cause there is no ryhme to discribe it all! Great job!
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    Thanks! Oh my goodness! I need to finish this poem! Forgot! Whoops!

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    Awsome i love it

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