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    Default Warpstones

    (Hopefully I can finish this.....)
    Chapter 1: A Message From Valerian

    The messenger, chosen for her persistence and running speed, dashed over to the forge, where her target was at hand.
    "Angela?" she inquired. The pixie at the anvil sighed, dropped the hammer, and turned around.
    "Yes? What do you want?"
    "I bring a message from the Queen. She needs your help with-" Angela picked up the hammer again, and slammed it against the metal she was working with.
    "Listen, dear, nothing suspicious has happened in weeks. The girls haven't found anyone acting oddly lately. We would have noticed."
    "It's...more of an issue with transpor-" Angela slammed the hammer again, this time spiking the already prominent red glow it bore.
    "I have better things to do then mess with how people get around. I want to live my own life, alright? I may be a hero, but I'm still a citizen."
    "People are in dan-"
    "Fine. And I'm assuming she wants the hero of Sacred Grove to show up, not one of her agents. Give me a minute to get out of this."
    I hardly call this place perfect. But I'm a mess, who can't handle any friendship without ruining it and has no one to turn to now.
    I belong right here, and I'm not moving. Ever again.

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    Default Re: Warpstones

    Ehhhh.
    I'd consider making the chapters a little longer and more detailed.
    But thats just my opinion.
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    I'm taking the Timeless Isle for the GEAR!
    Beware, Thunder King, nobody is safe from my monk.

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    Default Re: Warpstones

    Quote Originally Posted by chase123456tan View Post
    Ehhhh.
    I'd consider making the chapters a little longer and more detailed.
    But thats just my opinion.
    It gets better. Trust me.
    I hardly call this place perfect. But I'm a mess, who can't handle any friendship without ruining it and has no one to turn to now.
    I belong right here, and I'm not moving. Ever again.

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    Default Re: Warpstones

    I don't really trust anybody on here.
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    I'm taking the Timeless Isle for the GEAR!
    Beware, Thunder King, nobody is safe from my monk.

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