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    I have no idea how to write poetry. I'm not really sure if there is a "correct way." I just wrote out my thoughts... Enjoy! Tell me what you think!

    Eyes shut tight,
    My only escape,
    From The Pain I felt...
    Was the only way.


    Hand in hand
    With The Sorrow,
    I'd looked to the ground,
    Wishing...
    Hoping...
    For a Better Tomorrow.


    Every day,
    It was the same—
    People whispering to another,
    "Why can't she just go away?"


    You see,
    This is how I felt
    About The Pain.
    I'd lie there,
    Crying...
    Wondering...
    Asking the same,
    "Why can't I just go away?"


    I dreamt a dream one night
    Where I was happy.
    There was a beautiful, bright Light shining.
    I had tears—
    Not of sadness
    But of joy!


    In this dream,
    A familiar man walked up to me.
    He says,
    "My child, look at me,"
    And I did.
    "I don't want you to go away."


    There was something
    I had not felt
    In a while...
    This mysterious feeling.
    I thought, "Happiness."
    Then, I smiled.


    This man says,
    "Take my hand
    And release The Sorrow.
    I will help you
    Have a Better Tomorrow."


    "I am your Heavenly Father,
    Jesus Christ.
    I took The Pain away.
    I was The Great Sacrifice."


    As He told me this,
    He held out His hands
    And reached out to me,
    Showing His scars
    He says,
    "Who do you say that I am?"


    Eyes shut lightly,
    I knew it was true.
    "You are My God.
    It really is You."


    Eyes still shut,
    I felt an Embrace
    From none other than
    My God,
    My Father,
    My Savior.


    Eyes open slowly,
    I'm now awake
    Yet I somehow
    Still feel The Embrace.


    I look to the window.
    I see the familiar Light shining through.
    Then, I look away...
    I heard a voice,
    Saying,
    "I am with you."


    Yes, I believe
    It is true.
    My God is with me,
    And He is with you!


    The Pain is no longer here,
    For God is near.
    And He is with me
    Wherever I go.
    Now I know there will be
    A Better Tomorrow.
    Last edited by Princess Celestina; 02-09-2013 at 06:56 PM.

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    AMAZING, 11 OUT OF 10 STARS. It's the most beautiful thing i've heard c;

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    I'm shocked you don't know how to write poetry and write something like that.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Epik R0ckZ View Post
    AMAZING, 11 OUT OF 10 STARS. It's the most beautiful thing i've heard c;
    Wow, thank you so much!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Epik R0ckZ View Post
    I'm shocked you don't know how to write poetry and write something like that.
    I was a little surprised with myself when I saw the result. This is my second or third poem I've ever written in my life.

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    My best poem:

    The thing was red.
    It's eyes shocked me as i saw them blinking.
    It was wet with shaggy fur.
    Then i realized it was clifford the big red dog ;_;
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    Quote Originally Posted by Epik R0ckZ View Post
    My best poem:

    The thing was red.
    It's eyes shocked me as i saw them blinking.
    It was wet with shaggy fur.
    Then i realized it was clifford the big red dog ;_;
    You could write comedies!

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    Default Re: Untitled Poem (For Now)

    I teared up... So so beautiful
    It was fun playing with you guys! Ilysm!



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    Quote Originally Posted by KAnnamaria View Post
    I teared up... So so beautiful
    Thank you so much!

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    Impressive I must say it's good and you got talent so good job
    Still here and still around




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