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    Hello everybody, I would like to share a poem I had to write for my H. English class about someone in our lives we should give a thanks to for all the things they've done for us.
    I picked my mother because she's done a lot for me and my siblings growing up with an abusive relationship and struggling for years to raise us alone.
    ~Jack

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    by Jack

    When the love was fresh
    between you and him,
    When the memories were sweet
    and you were so innocent;

    Those times were so short
    and soon tainted by evil,
    Dark marks on freckled skin
    and broken bones hurt you;

    Through the times of trouble
    you kept strong,
    When you could bear no more
    you left that rotten love;

    With a broken heart
    you still kept strong,
    And with four little angels
    you raised all alone. . .

    Your angels are all grown up now
    leaving your care one by one,
    We are so grateful
    for all that you've done,
    We will always love you mom
    even when you're gone.
    Last edited by jaaaaaaaaack; 01-07-2013 at 07:57 PM.



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    So wonderful D':
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    That was beautiful!
    The end is a bit sad, but very sweet!
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    I envy you. I have such a hard time with poetry. Beautiful, though!



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    Thanks everyone ^_^ I actually read my poem to my mother when I got home from school and she wanted to cry, she loved it.

    @Veiled I am actually terrible with poetry. I think it helps when you write about something you can relate to though (:



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    Thats lovely poem

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    Wooooah, Jack! That's really magnificent I can definitely relate to this, great poem!
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    Nice Poem! Really good! 5 Stars!
    Done.

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    Thank you (:



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    i want stars D:
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