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    Default Starstruck: A random novel :P

    So, I decided to make a new novel because I have gotten better at writing
    ~Starstruck: Chapter 1~
    Lauren prepares herself for her Movie Premere. "I told you to to get me Hot Pink lipstick, not Berry Pink!" Lauren scowls at her assistant Marie with an annoyed grunt. "I'm sorry Madame," Marie apologizes with a look on her face that says, "I'm sorry you have to be so strict with people, Madame,' But all Lauren does is flip her Brown hair and strut towards a Jet Black Limo, Pink Evening zGown flowing in the wind. Lauren was utterly starstruck.
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    So, what do you think??? And you can say what you think It helps me become a better writer!
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    Default Re: Starstruck: A random novel :P

    -Waits- Tick....... Tock............ Tick.............. Tock.................. LOL
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    Default Re: Starstruck: A random novel :P

    .....Is there more to it?? Or does it have really short chapters? Either way, you need to add more the first chapter. But all in all...its great!!
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    Default Re: Starstruck: A random novel :P

    Thx! That helps me become a better wrter! Ill writemore tommorrow!
    I'm on the edge of glory, and i'm hanging on a moment with you <3
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