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    Icon1 A Reformation ~ By: CJisAwesome

    I usually spend my weekends on FR and writing novels and random stories. Here is one I'm working on at the moment.

    A Reformation
    By: CJisAwesome


    Chapter 1

    The cell door open to Cell 71259 Section A of the Sanctuary Prison. My cell.

    I sat in the dark corner and turned my head to see guards coming towards me. The light shown in from the opening of the door. Ah the light, I havn't seen it since the day I was put into this pit of dispare to rot 2 years ago at the mere age of 14.

    They placed shackles on my arms and dragged me. They squeezed my arms so hard they were numd and nearly purple which made me growl. We walked down a long corridor to a giant door embroded with jewels. There was only one thing in there. The Queen.

    The guards tossed me in like a a rag doll and slammed the door behind them. Loudly I growled then looked up to saw Queen Valerian and her guards staring at me.

    "Please stat this child's file information Captain." She said to as she sat on her throne.

    The Captain stepped forward to my side. "She is Leinth the half demon. Born to a human in Blackspore. She was 14 at her arrest and is now 16. She is skillfully trained in Archery, Medicine and the art of being a Ninja by a source unknown. Also very intelligent and is very, very powerful."

    Valerian smiled at me and replied. "That will be all, send... Leinth back."

    Something was going on, but I didn't know what.
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    Default Re: A Reformation ~ By: CJisAwesome

    awesome story! three smiles up!
    I'm on the edge of glory, and i'm hanging on a moment with you <3
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    Default Re: A Reformation ~ By: CJisAwesome

    Thanks for rating it. Chapter 2 will be up in a bit
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    Default Re: A Reformation ~ By: CJisAwesome

    k! i cant wait! -sits and waits eating popcorn-
    I'm on the edge of glory, and i'm hanging on a moment with you <3
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LLA7J...eature=related DONT STOP THE POP! <3
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    Default Re: A Reformation ~ By: CJisAwesome

    Your First Line pulled me in, the first line was great.....

    the rest of the Story was OK, and Just OK, nothing more, nothing less.

    It is great to see people getting Creative, you should join the Adventures Beyond Roleplay.....
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    Default Re: A Reformation ~ By: CJisAwesome

    Cool story! I like it! Very interesting..... I wanna read more
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    Default Re: A Reformation ~ By: CJisAwesome

    Love the story,
    Keep em' coming!


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    Default Re: A Reformation ~ By: CJisAwesome

    This has Inspired me to write. Thx.... I have something 'constructive' to do.
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    Default Re: A Reformation ~ By: CJisAwesome

    ^_^ Thanks to everyone who rated I'll be posting in a while
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    Default Re: A Reformation ~ By: CJisAwesome

    :O i love it!!!!! lol

    i'm writing a story but im only like 6 chapters in and i keep getting writers block
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