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    Chapter One: Hope Loune

    I woke up one sunny morning. I found it ashaming I might not see one like this again, as my maths test came on today. When I'd had my breakfast and gotten dressed, I spotted a girl on the other side of the road out of my bedroom window. She was opening and closing her mouth, and I couldn't see why until she did the sign teachers do when they want you to shut up. If I opened the window, I'd be asked why as I can't shut it. And I don't think saying I opened it to talk to a stranger was on the top of my to do list.
    Instead, I left the window and said I was leaving early for school. When I got to where the girl was standing, I realised for the first time she was wearing shades, and a mask over her mouth.
    "My name is Hope." She said. "I wish you could understand, what you should have known so long ago would happen now." I knew I had a puzzled look on my face from the feeling of wrinkles.
    "What should I have known? And if I..I.." I searched around my brain that was in rest mode. "Why should I have known it long ago?" I finished.
    "Something I can't say here." Said Hope.
    "Follow me." I said. "I have a good spot to hide,"
    "Very well." Said Hope. "Very well."

    When we got there, I realised that this hole had either gotten smaller, or me bigger. Hope didn't look like she was going to be very comftable, and she was smaller.
    "What is it?" I asked, brimming with excitment.
    "I have no clue why I should tell you - You are over the age to belive, but still," Hope put her fingers on a stone that looked like one my friends and I might have hammered into the wall when we built this place, and for a second, nothing happened, until the stone came free.
    "You and I," She started. "Are the folk of magic." She threw the rock up into the air, and when she did so, I saw pictures of a fire - Burning - And me, as a baby. As I focused harder, I saw it - Mum - Then, I focused more. In the corner, a girl.
    One who was no more than Hope.
    Hope Loune.

    "You're..My sister?" I asked, shocked, but not beliving it.
    "If this rock is lying.." Said Hope with a giggle. "You can crack it open,"
    I was thinking Hope was mad! Me, crack a rock open?! I couldn't to that!
    "Focus on the rock, and in your mind, picture it splitting in half."
    I closed my eyes, wary this may be a trick. I focused, and instead of making it crack down the middle in my mind, I made it explode. When I opened my eyes, Hope's glasses were cracked, revealing yellow eyes.
    "I might as well take this off too," She snarled, but then laughed. I expected something like sharp, vampiric teeth, but they were just a little blood stained.
    "Side effects from being a lion too long." She explained, as calm as anything.
    "Hold on! Could I make a duplicate me, that goes to school? And I stay?" I ask, excited.
    "Yes, that's possible. But I'm not sure you could-" Before she could finish, a second me was beside the real me.
    I whispered in it's ear, and it pranced off in the direction of school.
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    Thats cool you should write more
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    Thanks lol xP'
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    Tht took me 5 minutes to read Imma make tht longer..
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    Chapter.2: Magic training and family secrets.

    "You see," Said Hope, explaining how she turned into a lion. "Every magical being and gain the legs or full body of a animal. For example, Mum and Dad, They can turn half horse, or full horse. Centaurs, if only half, is what they're called. I can turn half lion, and you...Can turn half serpent. Wanna try now?" She said.
    "Infront of all these people? No way!" I said, wanting to, but not here.
    "Ok. There is a reason you were destined to come here. This exact hole. It is the gateway to a world of magic. Where people like us originate. Close your eyes, and picture the rock crumbling away...." I was already lost in my mind. I heard shifting of stones and soil, scraping against eachother until the gave way into another universe.
    "What is gonna happen to Mum and Dad?" I ask. "They are already there. Waiting."
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    Oh really..I lose three paragraphes there...-Eyes twich- o.e
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    It's great to see you writing again. Can't wait to read more of this and the Girl with the Wolf if you continue that.
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    Yea..Imma do more just now lawl.
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