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    Default Obliviate ~ A poem by Rain Wolfheart

    First of all, AUIHRFKJF don't give me spoilers. I haven't seen HP8 yet- I'm going on Tuesday. Second of all, I know this doesn't rhyme. I prefer free-verse poetry. Third of all, I know I didn't use any capital letter. It's for effect. Dun nag meh. Anyways, hope you guys like it (: I'm cool with constructive criticism. But no haters, hmm?

    obliviate
    by rain wolfheart

    it's hard to fight these tears
    you got me through so much
    every time i was sad
    i always thought “what would he do?”
    sleepless nights,
    endless days,
    you were always there for me.
    the end is in reach.
    i don't want it to be.
    you can't be gone.
    not forever.
    if you leave,
    i'll have no one left.
    don't leave me.
    i can't let your memory
    obliviate.

    *If you don't get it, it's about Harry Potter and how I don't want it to end ): ): ):
    Allons-y.

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    Default Re: Obliviate ~ A poem by Rain Wolfheart

    THAT WAS TERRIBLE! JK, I loved it =D I don't have much criticism right now, since I can't find anything wrong with your sha-mazing poem xD

    "Know therefore that the LORD your God is God, the faithful God who keeps covenant and steadfast love with those who love him and keep his commandments..." -Deuteronomy 7:9


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    Default Re: Obliviate ~ A poem by Rain Wolfheart

    Why thank you Clairie ^_^ Glad you liked it.
    Allons-y.

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    Default Re: Obliviate ~ A poem by Rain Wolfheart

    Wow...True that, Rain....
    My first crush was in 1st grade...Dun remember who, but it was probably one of the Wiggles or something xD
    -Princess Claire, aka my crazy yet lovable sissy (:

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    Thank yoo mommy (:
    Allons-y.

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    Default Re: Obliviate ~ A poem by Rain Wolfheart

    AND I just watched Deathly Hallows: Part 2. I feel like I need to add to this =P I feel so sad, yet happy, excited, worried, dissapointed, etc.
    Allons-y.

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    Default Re: Obliviate ~ A poem by Rain Wolfheart

    I loved it <3

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    Default Re: Obliviate ~ A poem by Rain Wolfheart

    the poem was lovely, a bit somber, and --yes, poetic.
    very much enjoyed reading.

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    Default Re: Obliviate ~ A poem by Rain Wolfheart

    Quote Originally Posted by Rain Wolfheart View Post
    AND I just watched Deathly Hallows: Part 2. I feel like I need to add to this =P I feel so sad, yet happy, excited, worried, dissapointed, etc.
    Wow. I thought when someone had that many emotions, they'd blow up.
    ~ Ron Weasly, Book 5

    THAT WAS DEEP! Spectacular! Although Harry Potter ended, I couldn't feel the joy of when it wasn't because I just started reading them now.. D:

    SEID IHR DAS ESSEN? NIEN, WIR SIND DIE JÄGER

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    Default Re: Obliviate ~ A poem by Rain Wolfheart

    HA! Thanks for the Ron quote xD And I'm starting to feel happier because I'm re-reading the series (I'm on Chamber of Secrets) and watching the movies (the next one we're gonna watch is Prisonner of Azkaban)

    Thanks, guys! I really appreciate it! ^_^
    Allons-y.

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