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Title: The Noismakin

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    Default The Noismakin

    One day, Fred (a 45yr old man) had a companion. His rug. The ruh was long, think, and fuzzy.

    Once day, Fred found a Noismakin. The creature made so much noise that Fred was a tiny bit annoyed.

    After two weeks, it happened again. Fred was so furious that he thew a chair at the Noismakin. The Noismakin flayed there, silent and dead. Fred cooked the Noismakin and ate him. Now Fred was jitterish.



    THE END!?!??!?!?!?!

    Maybe not
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    Default Re: The Noismakin

    Try to find my spelling errors in the prgp.
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    Default Re: The Noismakin

    Rug, thick, one, threw, Noisemakin, laid?
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    Default Re: The Noismakin

    Quote Originally Posted by Lilah Dimdal View Post
    One day, Fred (a 45yr old man) had a companion. His rug. The ruh was long, think, and fuzzy.
    This seems like a quite odd way to start a story, as if the story has already been going on.


    Maybe you should instead say "Once upon a time, Fred(a 45yr old man) had a companion. His rug." etc, I don't know, it just looks odd.

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    Default Re: The Noismakin

    Mind if i ask wuts a noisemakin O.o
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    Default Re: The Noismakin

    Good job peeps XD And ashfr you are corrrrrrECT!

    A noisemakin is a little nymph that makes annoying noises....
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    Default Re: The Noismakin

    sounds like someone killing and eating his little brother
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