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Title: Ninja's [failed] Poetry.

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    Default Ninja's [failed] Poetry.

    I won't go any further to crit myself than my little [failed] in the title...


    [love&arrow]

    Love is like an arrow
    Sometimes, you've just got to let it go
    To soar in the wind,
    To find a lover,
    To bury itself deep into their heart,
    And once it's gone, it's a task to get back again.

    [grim]

    You look so grim,
    Every time I see you
    I ask why.
    You say the same thing every time,
    "There is nothing the matter, sunshine."
    It's just such a lie.
    Why is this world just so grim,
    I ask?

    [steel]

    Once you were a revered soul
    Working day and night
    winning fight after fight
    Bringing pride to our people
    Hear your name shouted from heaven
    Once, you were steel.
    Solid as steel.
    Now you're just a nobody,
    ruined and shattered and broken,
    melted, shall we say, to the man who was steel.


    The above paragraphs are children of boredom - ugly things.
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    Default Re: Ninja's [failed] Poetry.

    Nice imagery. [:
    "The above paragraphs are children of boredom - ugly things."
    I liked this best, though. I know it wasn't a poem, but I thought it was cool. It sounds like a quote. [:<

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    I believe this is the point where I throw in the towel. [:

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    Default Re: Ninja's [failed] Poetry.

    It's not a quote, but it just proves how much I hate my work to make the best part of the thread my criticism. xD
    Heh I need to start a thread about that now! x]
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