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    Default The night Webkinz came alive

    Okay im not sure if its good, but if you can help out that would be nice.
    After night webkinz come to life. That was what one girl found out at least. One night Marcy was playing with her webkinz, " Marcy go to bed." her mother called. "Okay" she called back. Marcy fell asleep with her dog Tina at her feet. One by one each webkinz started to come to life. Miracle, the husky mayor and Luxa her leopard asistant helped to keep things hidden. Like a nightly routine Miracle helped all the Webkinz with their simple needs. While she was helping MoJoe to unstick his foot from the gum Marcy put on him, she heard someone crying. After she helped MoJoe she followed the sound of the cryer to Dixie. "Whats wrong Dixie?" Miracle pondered. " M- Myra w-was making fun o-of my horns again." cried Dixie. Miracle told Dixie to follow her and so they went to find Myra.
    Thats all I could think of at the moment. If you think its similar to a book, it is. Its kind of like The Doll People. If you can help please do. I'll post more when I can think of more to the story.
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    Default Re: The night Webkinz came alive

    Quote Originally Posted by bellesluv View Post
    Okay im not sure if its good, but if you can help out that would be nice.
    After night webkinz come to life. That was what one girl found out at least. One night Marcy was playing with her webkinz, " Marcy go to bed." her mother called. "Okay" she called back. Marcy fell asleep with her dog Tina at her feet. One by one each webkinz started to come to life. Miracle, the husky mayor and Luxa her leopard asistant helped to keep things hidden. Like a nightly routine Miracle helped all the Webkinz with their simple needs. While she was helping MoJoe to unstick his foot from the gum Marcy put on him, she heard someone crying. After she helped MoJoe she followed the sound of the cryer to Dixie. "Whats wrong Dixie?" Miracle pondered. " M- Myra w-was making fun o-of my horns again." cried Dixie. Miracle told Dixie to follow her and so they went to find Myra.
    Thats all I could think of at the moment. If you think its similar to a book, it is. Its kind of like The Doll People. If you can help please do. I'll post more when I can think of more to the story.
    really good beginning
    assistant is spelled wrong though....
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    Default Re: The night Webkinz came alive

    Thank you. I was't paying attention to spelling.
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    I love it!! ive been neglecting my webkinz since FR went live lol

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