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    "Help! Help!" I let out a low moan. *coughs* The room was filled with smoke. The fire had already spread to the top floor of the building. I was trapped. The stench of the smoke made my eyes tear. Was there even a bit of hope left for me? Screams and Crys filled the night. "Trapped, Trapped"...the only thoughts in my head at the time. Where were the firemen? I started to cry, thinking about my family, my friends, how their life's would be impacted without me. The room spun around me and I blacked out.

    When I awoke, the fire was put out. But I was no longer inside the building, but instead, I was outside. The first thing that came into my mind, "my family". I saw my mom sitting next to a firetruck, in a green blanket. I rushed over and hugged her, but for some reason my arms didn't wrap around her, it went right through her!

    "If only they had come here sooner!" she sobbed.

    "What do you mean mom!" I said in a louder tone.

    A fireman went up to her and told her it would be best if she went back to a friend's house. She started walking away.

    "Mom!" I cried.

    It was like she didn't even see or hear me.

    What was happening?

    A white glow appeared. And a person stood in front of me.

    "Who are you?" I asked

    "I'm James, Keeper of lost souls, I am here to tell you that you are no longer living"

    "What do you mean?"

    "You died In the fire. There is this rule, you have an option. Your soul can be uplifted, or you can stay down here on earth, to live out your life as a ghost."

    "A G-ga-ga-ghost?" I stuttered. I was all choked up. All this, thrown at me all at once, like I didn't have a say that I Would not want to die.

    "You have 24 hours to make your decision."

    "Wait what if..."

    He vanished.


    What was I supposed to do? Alone. Wandering for all eternity. What should my decision be?
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    Last edited by Christopher Darkcove; 11-26-2009 at 08:15 PM.
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    Wow Good Writing Skills! =]
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    Default Re: My Story-Christopher Darkcove

    christopher you have the writing gift lol

    ragu does too

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    Pretty imaginative.. Looks like its could turn into a good story. I'll be interested to read more

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    me too...i stink at writing but love a good story

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    i will put the story up after i'm done my project for school
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    That was very good!
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    if only i can write like that google guy"an astonished company with a healthy reagard for the inpossible!"-google guy
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    wow christopher thats pretty good

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    Franticly searching for next thread to this story..... it is very well written !

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