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Title: My new song

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    Icon1 My new song

    if i can fly
    if i can fly ahead
    with hope to be again
    if i can fly
    up in the sky
    whould that be a dream come true
    i can see the towers
    and the montain range
    if i can fly
    oh if i can fly_
    i_
    just for once
    in my life
    if i can fly!
    up in the sky!
    there in away!
    never say!
    it's impossable!
    if i can fly!
    if i can fly!_
    i can fly!
    just to be!
    a miracle!
    what...a....dream
    up,up,up away
    down in the ground all day
    why can't i...
    for once in my life...
    fly________
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    Default Re: My new song

    That flows really well and I'd like to hear it set to music. Have I said you have a nice Avi? You do.
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    Default Re: My new song

    I like the song!!!!!!

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    Nice song there

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    I love it! it is so nice!
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    I love the lyrics, but I'd like to here some music set with it! The lyrics are clear and I think that it can be hard to find that in a song these days.
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    Nice song! It's lovley! I wish I could fly too lol.

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    That is Very Inspiring to Fly.. Lol, Good Job! I Like it.


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    Default Re: My new song

    So far it's pretty good. But when it's set to music it could get a little repetitive. All you have to do is polish it up a bit and it'll be even better. Try adding a bridge or something (when my songs get repetitive that's what I use). A bridge adds a nice change and it often adds a little more complexity to the song.

    Other than that, great job! Keep up the good work!
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