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    Icon1 Lily and the popular group

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    My name is Lily, I live in a town with 100 inhabitants adults, 50 children, 50 babies.
    At my school there are 15 children in my class (but of course that few indeed are many!).
    The boys and some girls are created "Popular." I also throw small balls of paper with drool on his head (children).
    Girls just tell me "Loser!".
    Well, I ignore them, because I know you are joking (sometimes).
    A typical day as always, the popular five children were sick, and were 10 children.
    I so bold, call one of the children in this group and said, "Do you have flu? Ja!"
    And the child answered me: "Hey, you're losing."
    Well, I for intelligent, hung on his way to say "Loser."
    Ok, the class went faster than normal, because no one was distracted.
    The weekend came and went to my farm.
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    I arrived at the farm dizzy, because they had lots of rocks.
    I have three dogs here, Junky, Funky and Lunky, all are men.
    Junky eats ... not how to say ...
    trash.
    Funky Funk likes music.
    Lunky ...
    likes to sleep.
    Crash My cousin was waiting there with Lunky asleep in his arms.
    Well, as always, Junky Funky and came running towards me like crazy, because they are crazy.
    Well, I have a horse named Kiley, she is the fastest and likes to run with me.
    My best friend July, lived next door, and I always come to visit.
    I often bring some sweets and chocolates.
    Oh sure, the popular kids were in the hospital.
    The next day, a popular girl called me and said ...
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    "Lily, do you want to join the * cough * popular?"
    Well, as I always wanted to join them, said:
    "Sure, why not?"
    Then I said, "But you have to disturb your classmates. That's the first of everything."
    At the moment I hung up and thought, "My best friend July, what will happen to her?".
    When I returned to school, talk to July:
    "July, will I join them or what?"
    July said:
    "Best ...




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    ... We will see that in the farm. "
    The days passed very long as a year, and sweated and thought ...
    ... On Friday I was told:
    "Ah, Are you going to join" YES "or" NO "?"
    I said:
    "Let me think about it until Monday."
    He spent Friday and July and I talked.
    "Lily, do not want you to join them."
    "But July, kill me if I am not one of them."
    (Do not know if they will kill me or not.)
    July and Monday insisted he told the popular kids:
    "Lily is not going to join the popular group because they are very insulting."
    Then taked July and began to hit.
    I thought and thought, I decided.
    "I want to hit me, I am guilty of this."
    July was half happy and half sad.
    Everyone laughed at me, and hitting.
    A week later, I was in the hospital.
    July came to visit me and said:
    "I'm glad what you did for me, but also you learned to use your courage."
    And my last words were:
    "Thank you, July."


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    Default Re: Lily and the popular group

    wait??????????what???????i really didnt get this...........

    oh............................wait nvm lol
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    Default Re: Lily and the popular group

    Nice story line. This would be a great book if it were a series. But if you don't look at it as a series, then you might want to make the chapters longer.
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    Icon9 Re: Lily and the popular group

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoey704 View Post
    Nice story line. This would be a great book if it were a series. But if you don't look at it as a series, then you might want to make the chapters longer.
    I'm very thankful of your comment! I will try to do a series... thank you very much!

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