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Title: Just something I have been writing.

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    Default Just something I have been writing.

    The crisp cool air smells of morning dew,
    The sky was nice, a shade of blue.
    The birds were singing soft and sweet,
    Trying to find the someone they'll meet.
    The grass was lush long and green,
    The whole wide world is important to me.
    Lets take care of our beautiful earth.
    - Broken




    Can you tell me if it's good? Thanks!

    Last edited by Mazenta; 04-05-2013 at 10:13 PM.
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    Default Re: Just something I have been writing.

    Very nice poem but in all honesty I love all the lines except the last two. It's very hard to rhyme and rhyming poems are the only poems I can actually stand.

    Superb job, I know I couldn't have done that!
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