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    Icon12 How my life changed on July 14th

    Chapter 1
    July 14th It is full moon tonight and Veronica is taking to long in the bathroom. "UGH VERONICA HURRY UP!!!!"
    Knock! Knock! Knock! I knocked on the bathroom door.
    "Be Paintent!" Veronica growled in a think painful voice.
    "KAYLEIGH!!" Yelled mom. "WHAT MOM?' "Dinner!" I rushed down the stairs to get to the dining room table so i could eat i was starved. When i got downstairs I had realized it was to early for dinner and my mom had lied to me because when i got down there i saw her being held by a teenage girl she held her head as if she was ready to bite her if someone said or did the wrong thing and the only thing i could think was that that teenager was a vampire. I was so scared i didn't know what to do so i ran back up there stairs and ran into the door full p
    ower and the door broke open and when i looked in there i saw a furry black beast moaning and i was even more scared.


    Ok that was chapter one hope you liked it i will be making the next chapter and it will be up in about an hour
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    Default Re: How my life changed on July 14th

    Theres probaly words spelled wrong wrong punctation idc really about spelling and puctation I'm still learing about it so plz don't correct me.

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    Default Re: How my life changed on July 14th

    Seems awesome, but needs more detail (;
    Each Event is preceded by Prophecy. But without the hero, there is no Event.

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    Default Re: How my life changed on July 14th

    Thanks, my teacher always tells me to much details and takes them out so i now don't add tons of details

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    Default Re: How my life changed on July 14th

    Bump bumpety bump

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