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    Default He Told Me {A Poem by Rain Wolfheart}

    He Told Me
    by Rain Wolfheart
    He told me to leave
    He told me to run
    He told me to flee the sun
    He told me he loved me
    He told me he wouldn't forget
    He told me he had to go
    He told me I was beautiful
    He told me I was his world
    He told me I was in danger
    He told me everything would change
    He told me everything would be different
    He told me everything would be alright someday
    He told me this world wasn't safe
    He told me this world was chasing me
    He told me this world was too dangerous
    He told me they would come
    He told me they would hurt me
    He told me they would pull us further apart
    He told me to leave
    He told me to run
    Now lonely owls flee the sun.

    Constructive criticism welcome (:
    Interpret this however you want, but if you're curious this is the backstory behind it.
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    This is from the perspective of my original character in the Harry Potter universe, Hecate Twist. She's a Muggle-born witch who is in her sixth year during the events of Deathly Hallows. (She's a Hufflepuff and the shyest girl you'll ever meet) She is in a relationship with a half-blood wizard a year above her (he's a minor canon character, but I'd rather not say who he is) He has to return to Hogwarts, since it's now law, but since Muggle-borns are now being interrogated and sometimes arrested, he tells her to take her family and go into hiding. She does, but she goes into a bit of a depression: she's separated from the magical world, she's still underage so she can't use magic to protect herself and her family, and her only way of communicating with her friends is by owl- and she needs to be careful about what she says, since owls might be intercepted or tracked. She sends and recieves them at night, away from whatever safe house they're at, and every time she sends one it's when they're about to change locations. Anyways, I'm really starting to like this character, even though I initially felt like she would be a bit of a Mary-Sue when I created her. Now, I like her, and I think she's a much better role-model than my other original character (in the new generation, AKA she goes to school with the trio and everyone's children) Athena Gryffon, a firey-tempered Gryffindor prankster Fred and George would be proud of. I don't have a Marauders-generation one yet, but hopefully I will once I finish Hecate.
    Allons-y.

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    Default Re: He Told Me {A Poem by Rain Wolfheart}

    "Now lonely owls flee the sun."
    Best.

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    Default Re: He Told Me {A Poem by Rain Wolfheart}

    Thanks, Ella ^_^
    Allons-y.

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    Wowww....Future poet and author much? (:
    My first crush was in 1st grade...Dun remember who, but it was probably one of the Wiggles or something xD
    -Princess Claire, aka my crazy yet lovable sissy (:

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    Hehe, thanks Lily. I'm anxious for us to start poetry in French- I wrote one last year that I'm rather proud of, but we never got to present our finished products ):
    Allons-y.

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    Default Re: He Told Me {A Poem by Rain Wolfheart}

    Quote Originally Posted by Rain Wolfheart View Post
    He Told Me
    by Rain Wolfheart
    He told me to leave
    He told me to run
    He told me to flee the sun
    He told me he loved me
    He told me he wouldn't forget
    He told me he had to go
    He told me I was beautiful
    He told me I was his world

    He told me I was in danger
    He told me everything would change
    He told me everything would be different
    He told me everything would be alright someday
    He told me this world wasn't safe
    He told me this world was chasing me
    He told me this world was too dangerous
    He told me they would come
    He told me they would hurt me
    He told me they would pull us further apart
    He told me to leave
    He told me to run

    Now lonely owls flee the sun.

    Constructive criticism welcome (:
    Interpret this however you want, but if you're curious this is the backstory behind it.
    Spoiler: show

    This is from the perspective of my original character in the Harry Potter universe, Hecate Twist. She's a Muggle-born witch who is in her sixth year during the events of Deathly Hallows. (She's a Hufflepuff and the shyest girl you'll ever meet) She is in a relationship with a half-blood wizard a year above her (he's a minor canon character, but I'd rather not say who he is) He has to return to Hogwarts, since it's now law, but since Muggle-borns are now being interrogated and sometimes arrested, he tells her to take her family and go into hiding. She does, but she goes into a bit of a depression: she's separated from the magical world, she's still underage so she can't use magic to protect herself and her family, and her only way of communicating with her friends is by owl- and she needs to be careful about what she says, since owls might be intercepted or tracked. She sends and recieves them at night, away from whatever safe house they're at, and every time she sends one it's when they're about to change locations. Anyways, I'm really starting to like this character, even though I initially felt like she would be a bit of a Mary-Sue when I created her. Now, I like her, and I think she's a much better role-model than my other original character (in the new generation, AKA she goes to school with the trio and everyone's children) Athena Gryffon, a firey-tempered Gryffindor prankster Fred and George would be proud of. I don't have a Marauders-generation one yet, but hopefully I will once I finish Hecate.
    This reminds me of my most recent relationship. I'm trying to heal from it. He hurt me too bad, and told me all this stuff which were lies.
    Signature credit goes to: Stephanie Stonyray (Thanks Stephanie)

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    Default Re: He Told Me {A Poem by Rain Wolfheart}

    Reminds me of one of my ex-boyfriends......LIAR Dx But I didn't like him anymore, so it was okay o_o AHEM! * copy paste*

    Wowww....Future poet and author much? (:


    You should be proud. Not only do you have an awesome, but not-so-bright daughter, you have an awesome AND smart child tooooooo! Even though she isn't really related to you......IT WAS AN AWESOME POEM, message done....xD

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    Default Re: He Told Me {A Poem by Rain Wolfheart}

    Thanks for the different interpretations. I never thought of it that way (:
    Claire... xD
    Allons-y.

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    Default Re: He Told Me {A Poem by Rain Wolfheart}

    Wow... It's amazing Rain! (I dunno if it's possible that it's HP based makes it more awesome, that'd make too much awesome.)

    It... and excuse this but... was Totally Awesome!

    "In a land of myth, and a time of magic… the destiny of a great kingdom rests on the shoulders of a young boy. His name… Merlin."





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    Default Re: He Told Me {A Poem by Rain Wolfheart}

    *Dies from awesomeness*
    XP

    *Is reborn from awesomeness*
    BEST. POEM. EVAH.
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