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    Default Girls Adventures with the Girls Club Chapters

    Welcome, Ya'll, To my first book on free realms. Lets start with the characters bios


    Kaya:


    Felicity Merriman & Elizabeth cole:



    Josefina:


    Addy


    Rebecca Rubin:
    What she discovers: It's possible to blend old and new traditions- without giving up your dreams
    Pets: Two kittens

    Kit Kittredge & Ruthie Smithens:
    Favorite Book: Robin Hood and His Adventures
    Prized Possion: Her Typewriter! She loves writing newspaper for dad to read when he gets home
    What she discovers: Sometimes, Along with hard times come good times
    Pet: A Basset Hound

    Molly Mcintire & Emily Bennet:

    Friends: Susan;Linda; and Emily
    What she Discovers: Doing your part isn't always easy, but its the right thing to do.


    Julie Allright & Ivy Ling:
    Favorite Dessert: Chocolate Fondue
    Best friend: Ivy Ling
    What she discovers: The best way to cope with change is to make changes of your own
    Pets: a Chihuahua, a Poodle, and a Terrier.



    Lanie:

    Who she is: An energetic girl who discovers the world in her own backyard.
    Favorite School Subject: Science
    Furry Friend: A lop-eared bunny named Lulu
    What she wants to be: To be like her friend Dakota and travel around the world helping wildlife
    What she discovers: Adventures are all around us- starting right outside the back door!


    Chapter one: The new girl mystery.



    Kit woke up from Grace barking & the Sun shining brightly through the bedroom window. She looked at her calender. It was the first day of school! She hurried to get dressed in a Floral Blouse, Cropped knit jacket, soft wool skirt, knee socks, and brown shoes. She grabbed her matched felted hat and hurried down for Breakfast. Momma put a plate of eggs, toast, and bacon down on the table and Grace hurried up next to Kit. " No, Grace" Kit said standing up to feed her dog. She quickly ate, grabbed her backpack and lunch, and hurried to the bus stop. She ran into Ruthie and Molly at the stop. They climbed aboard. " Molly, why don't you sit next to Kaya this time?" asked Kit.

    " I don't know." Molly answered quietly.

    " If you would, I'd get to sit next to Kit for once." Ruthie commented

    " Fine." said Molly, going to an empty seat

    Then, Ruthie and Kit sat across from her. A blonde girl stepped up onto the bus right on time and sat in back.

    " Who's that?" I asked Ruthie

    " I don't know, She looks shy, " Ruthie replied

    " I don't reconize her, "

    " I heard a new girl moved next door, I think it might be her "


    The bus pulled to a stop. Julie, Ivy, Rebecca, Kaya, and Addy stepped on and got a seat. The bus neared school and everyone piled off.

    " Hey, Kit, What are you doing for Christmas?" Rebecca asked.

    " I think I'll make Cookies" Kit replied

    " Nice idea " Rebecca commented

    " Do you know that girl?" Kit asked

    " No, But Molly's been talking to her. It might be a friend, why don't you ask her?" Rebecca suggested

    " OK"

    Kit went up to Molly.

    " Molly?" Kit asked

    "Yeah?" Molly answered shyly.

    "Who's that?" asked Kit

    "Thats Lanie, She moved in nearby. We're friends. She loves animals and has a Bunny, Lulu."

    " That sounds so cool!" I replied "Can I meet her?"

    "Meet my bunny?" a voice asked.

    It was Lanie, walking up to Kit and Molly

    "Yes, hello Lanie, i'm Kit, nice to meet you." I said

    " Thanks, nice to meet you, if you wanna see Lulu you could come over after school" She said

    "OK, i think your next door to Rebecca?"

    "Yep"

    "Great! She's not too far down"

    "Why don't we walk down together?'

    "Great idea!"

    " I'll come, too" Said Molly

    Kit walked down to her classroom with Molly and Lanie.
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    Default Re: Girls Adventures with the Girls Club Chapters

    Pretty good, but you forgot a LOT of commas.
    Each Event is preceded by Prophecy. But without the hero, there is no Event.

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    Default Re: Girls Adventures with the Girls Club Chapters

    Chapter 2: Lanie's A+


    The girls sat down in their seats as Miss Lilac got ready for attendance.

    Attendance ended quickly, then came the Test.

    Lanie did way better in Science than any other girl there!

    "Lanie, how did you do with Science?" Kit asked Lanie as they were walking to Lanie's place
    "I got an A+!" She said, pulling out her test page.
    "That's Great.." Molly said sadly
    " it is, what's wrong molly?" i asked
    " i got B- at everything!" Molly said, sadly
    " That's OK, as long as you dont get a D down!" i said

    Lanie led the girls down the path. Her yard was big and usually beautiful with flowers.
    School vacation was over, so the yard was a little less pretty than it usually was.

    " come on inside, my room is upstairs " Lanie said, leading Kit up the stairs.
    " Wow, Nice house, its very big! "
    " Yeah, come on! "

    Lanie opened the door to her room. It was very pretty and felt like you were still outside. The ceiling was a light shade of blue, the walls were green and had Trees and Mountains and plants and animals painted. Her furniture looked like it was made from Tree Bark and other natural materials. There was a door leading to another room, and above it a tunnel was coming through the wall. They went through the door into a really cool room for Lanie's Rabbit.
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    Lulu was laying down in her bed, napping peacefully.
    "Lulu." said lanie
    the bunny woke up and twiched her nose.
    "Shes so adorable"
    "Yes, i tamed her at a zoo and took her home"
    "Not normal, i never get to do that"
    "Why dont we have a sleepover soon??"
    "OK!"
    Music, that really keeps me movin' lets get it going, alright, our smiles are showin' -The Fresh Beat Band.

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    AWESOME!!!!!! i know this is a silly question but this is based off the American Girl people rite?

    LOL( lots of luv),
    Claire

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    Default Re: Girls Adventures with the Girls Club Chapters

    Quote Originally Posted by Princess Claire View Post
    AWESOME!!!!!! i know this is a silly question but this is based off the American Girl people rite?

    LOL( lots of luv),
    Claire
    i think so... continue writing!
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    Hey i came across your story and i thought it was great. Keep up the good writing
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    Default Re: Girls Adventures with the Girls Club Chapters

    pretty cool...and can u guys help me on a few things?
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    Default Re: Girls Adventures with the Girls Club Chapters

    What do you need help with, Chase? As a member of <Insiders> I pledge to help people as much as i can. Please let me know.......


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