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    The Girl
    By: Trish19 Chapter 1 : Mystery Life
    I was a girl. Just a girl i was. An Average girl. There was a person right behind me, watching me. For every step i take, I can feel Her. Yes, the person is a girl. I can feel it. It's Strong, very strong.
    As i Turn.. Puff* Nobody was seen by my human eye. Was that true or was it just a illusion?
    I wonder. Who am I?
    In times like these i must be wondering about her. But I have a strong feeling she was me.
    When i turned back on the track to home. Puff* The sound of her.
    The Her is someone, someone i know....
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    How is it? if ya like it i might make an other chapter.....
    i know its lame but ya....

    Hehe Lame.
    My story is lame.

    PLEASE POST IF YOU WANT TO BE IN THE STORY!!!!

    CHARATERS!!!
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    It has an air of mystery about it, I like that. I am interested in reading more....as long as you promise not to use black.
    Nothing is permanent.

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    Thanks
    Chapter 2: She....She...
    I finally realized that i was lost, in a forest full of trees and leaves.
    I walked slowly onto the fallen leaves. I couldn't hear my feet crunching the leaves, but i heard something....... it...it was her.
    She finally escapes from her shadow. Being Free...Being wild....
    Like what i imagined, It was me.
    She acted confident. A proud girl. A girl i was trying to be. She look like me....
    Was it true? Is she me? But probably she escaped out of my heart. I wonder.
    Can she speak? I think she can, by the way she might be me.....
    The Real Me.
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    Eh... This is a fantasy.... Just ta let ya know

    I am bored so let me do more!!!!!
    Chapter 3: Does this journey start here?
    I took a deep Breath. breathing deeply* And I went to her. She stared at me. Looking clueless, I step in front of her. Puff* She was gone.
    A moment later.....She ....Puff* was behind me.
    I turn around waiting for her to speak. She didn't.
    "Who are you? What is your name?", I asked. "Jumbo.", she replied.
    "Jumbo?", I asked. "Your name is Jumbo?"
    Puff*
    She disapeared but reappeared next to a tree.
    She went north. Is this the journey to a new begining? Am i in this fairy tale where everything can come true?
    Wrong. That was my answer for now. We were just going around the forest.
    She led to a lake, not so far from the place we met.
    "I am Tina. I cannot talk when i am not near water and i can only say Jumbo.", She said.
    "Is this our journey?", i asked.
    Were we here for a reason?
    Does she need to talk for something important?
    What was it? What did she want from Me?

    Chapter 4: On The Way
    She shot me a look. A strict look. She knew what i was thinking. Strange....
    She went. "Where are you going?", I asked.
    She looked back and smiled. Then she went and disapeared in the shadows of the forest. I went to find her.....Puff* a strange little creature was there.
    Yes, it was a cute creature that reminds me of some cute creatures in anime...
    "Hi! My name is ....um...I forgot my name....",the little creature said.
    "I'll name you...Your name is Yori.", I smiled as I spoke.
    "Ok! Hi! My name is Yori!!!!". "I know that.....", I spoke under my breath
    "Off to a new journey Trish! Follow me!", Yori said.
    Hmmmm....
    Yori went to me but why?
    How does Yori know my name?
    Is Yori a girl or a boy?............

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    Nice! Check out my Story ----> The Gemmed Egg.
    My internet has been out for quite a while now, so I won't be able to get on.
    ~~Amanda at the Library.
    I feel like that cat right now.


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    It's really good, i like the Mysteriousness about it.I would say it's genres are Fantasy and Mystical.
    Anyone need anything Boys Only, Combat or anything else except Girls Only PM me

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    should make another its great!
    After the Sharp Eyed Jay and The Roaring Lion,Peace Will Come On Dove's Gentle Wing.

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    Chapter 5
    While we were walking there was a silence but..Yori broke it.
    "I am your partner now "
    "Why?" I asked.
    "OO: Why Not! Well the queen said to find a partner..." "Ok....." I looked at the ground...
    "My name is Yori. I am a Female. I come from the island."
    "What island..?" I asked.
    "The Island!".... "Ok.."
    Narrator: Lets continue this with a different Chapter HehHe...

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    We went uphill and we swam in water.. Until a figure appeared.
    We Swam until we landed on the island.
    A group of students were going to class. I saw a school.
    They were about 14-17 years old.
    -drops my mouth open-
    There was my cousin.
    "Here we are! Wizard school!" Said my partner.
    "hmm...."
    I looked at another Direction. Two more other schools.
    Yori looked at my way. "Huh!''
    "What?", i asked.
    "Thats Mage School"
    "And thats Potion School?" I asked.
    "Wow." Yori shook her head
    "What!? I am Getting Annoyed!!!"
    "You are a real member of this world." I Laughed. "You are kidding!!!!!"\
    "I saw your reaction when you saw your cousin. They all take part here."
    I faint.
    Yori laughed. "Lucky you. if you were on cement you would you to the Goblin's Booty Hospital."
    When I woke up I saw my brother.
    "Hmm.. Finally. You are old anough to know about this."

    What!? What happened?
    Did i have an accident and my brother got me? And Yori and everybody else was a Dream when i got the accident?
    What?....What?... what did happen?
    To Be CONTINUE!



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    Nice job !

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    I love the story!!!!!!!!!!!!! I write too but my stories are like novels.....

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