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    Default Friendly FIre ~~ A Novel by Amanda.

    I've gotten much better at writing storys, because I've been writing int eh Role Play for a little over two months now. (:

    ~~~Chapter 1: Best friends~~~
    Amanda, Nikky and, Ella. Just your three regular best friends, walking through the town of Sanctuary. As they're walking through Sanctuary three guards attacked them, and put them into shackles. They brought them to Queen Valerian, and threw them to the ground, as if they were rag dolls. They feel to there knees infront of the Queen. "What are their names?" The Queen asks the guards. "Amanda, daughter of Hades." Says one guard. "Nikky, the strongest emo fairy." Another guard says. "Ella, powerful wizard pixie, uses pink beams to destroy her enemies." The other guard says.
    ---------------------Got to go to bed, so I'll write more tomorrow. (: Tell me what you think!------------
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    Default Re: Friendly FIre ~~ A Novel by Amanda.

    Oooh! I want to see more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Default Re: Friendly FIre ~~ A Novel by Amanda.

    YIPPEE!! Thank you for letting me have the power of pink beams...

    Also, great and awesome story, i can't wait for more.

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    Default Re: Friendly FIre ~~ A Novel by Amanda.

    Great story so far! Very suspenseful! Bravo! XD
    My first crush was in 1st grade...Dun remember who, but it was probably one of the Wiggles or something xD
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    Default Re: Friendly FIre ~~ A Novel by Amanda.

    (:
    Chapter 1: Best friends part 2
    "W-Why are we here?!" Ella asks, terrified.
    "We need you here, in my prison, so you won't hurt anyone." The Queen replies.
    "LET US GO!" Amanda screams, and her shackles shatter.
    "Get her!" The Queen orders. The three guards grab Amanda, and she screams again, and black fire surrounds her feet. The fire burns the guards feet. "Gahh!" One shouts. Amanda screams again, and the whole castle shakes. "Keep control of her!" The Queen shouts, getting terrified. They tie her with ropes. "That won't hold her!" Nikky shouts. Amanda screams, and the ropes burn. "Amanda, stop!" Ella shouts. "Let me go! I can stop her!" Nikky shouts. The guards unlock Nikky's shackles. She stands up, and runs over to Amanda. "Amanda! Stop!" She whispers in Amanda's ear. Amanda suddenly calms down. The fire disappears. Amanda falls to her knees, and the guards put shackles back on her. "Anyway, you three will stay in this prison, until you learn you control yourselves!" The Queen says, and glares at Amanda.

    The guards pick up the three girls, and walk to the prison. They throw them in separate cells. Amanda breaks her shackles. She tries to pick the lock on the cell, but fails.
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    Default Re: Friendly FIre ~~ A Novel by Amanda.

    Ooh, very exciting! Can't wait for more!
    Allons-y.

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    Default Re: Friendly FIre ~~ A Novel by Amanda.

    If you guys want to be in it, you can! Just post what you look like, in a PM. And I'll try and fit you in! (:
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    Default Re: Friendly FIre ~~ A Novel by Amanda.

    YAY, AMANDA IS THE NICEST PERSON EVER.. O_O

    -tippy toes away from this thread and to Amanda's Page to P.M her. o.o
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    Chapter 2: The Valentine Angel
    Nikky, Ella, and Amanda, finally are released from the prison. "Now remember," The Queen says,
    "Keep control of yourself." "Yes, Ma'am," The all say. A bright light shines in front of them. An angel appears. "V-Valentina??" Ella asks. "Ella??" The angel asks. Ella, and the angel hug each other. "I never thought I'd see you again, Ella!" Valentina says.

    --I'm really tired right now, so I'll write WAY more later. .-. ---
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    Default Re: Friendly FIre ~~ A Novel by Amanda.

    Epic Story!
    I can't wait for more!

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