Play Free Realms NowJoin Free Realms Insider

Results 1 to 7 of 7
  1. #1
    TechDeck14's Avatar
    TechDeck14 is offline Master Gamer
    Join Date
    Feb 2010
    Posts
    3,654

    Default Freerealms 2012: The Perfect World

    Chapter One: The Best Day

    "What a nice day," said Anthony as he walked out his door.
    Looking up into the sky, he noticed the blue sky was cloudless.
    "Not a cloud in the sky," he said to himself.
    As he walked down the sandy beach floor of his Oceanfront Home, he said to himself "This day can't get any better. The weather is nice, the birds are chirping and everyone's having fun down at the beach."
    When he was walking down to the beach, he stumbled upon a shiny gold dubloon.

    "Wow, this day is truly the best I have ever had! I feel very lucky to have found this old pirate-like coin.
    I'm gonna go trade it in for some coins later. I will soon be wealthy!"
    He was going to the warm sandy beach to swim with the beautiful fish he loved.
    As soon as he got in he felt the warm, wet water.
    Then, he spotted his friend, Alex, in the launch pads.

    "Hey, what's up," said Anthony.
    "Nothing, just hanging around with my pets." said Alex
    *Anthony laughs*
    "Stop fooling around Alex and let's go swimming with the sharks," Anthony declared.
    "Are you crazy!? Swimming with sharks?" Alex mentioned.
    "Alright, let's go swimming at least," Anthony added.
    As they walked to the seashore, they noticed it was polluted with tires and garbage.
    "Not a fun thing to see," Alex and Anthony remarked.
    "Nothing a little teamwork can't fix," Alex announced.

    "Let's get to work. We must finish this once and for all." Alex declared.
    "Start with the tires." Anthony said.
    Suddenly, a stranger appeared. The two kids looked up at him and smiled widely.
    It was Anthony's dad, David!
    Anthony gave him a huge hug.
    He had been in the video game industry for over six years.
    "Hey dad! I missed you! What did you do in your business trip?" Anthony said.
    "Well, we made new video games and trained for the most part. Anyway, can I join you little fellas? Anthony's dad mentioned.
    "Umm, sure." said both Anthony and Alex.
    A few hours passed and it was almost clean.
    "Phew! It's so hot out here. Maybe we can take a little break and go swimming." Alex said.

    "Well, it's getting dark, we have to go back inside. Maybe we can finish this up tomorrow." His father added.
    Alex said, "Alright, let's go to bed, it's been a long day."

    Chapter Two: The Move

    *The next morning*
    As Anthony awoke, his dad stared at him with weary eyes.
    "I just got a call from my boss. We have to move to Snowhill because they are moving there business over there." Anthony's dad mentioned.
    "What?! We have to move?! How will I make new friends? Especially the part of transferring schools scares me." Anthony added. To be finished......
    Last edited by TechDeck14; 06-21-2011 at 07:21 PM.

  2. #2
    TechDeck14's Avatar
    TechDeck14 is offline Master Gamer
    Join Date
    Feb 2010
    Posts
    3,654

    Default New Story Coming Soon!

    The first chapter will take about 3 days to finish. I don't have much time to be on the computer.
    Last edited by TechDeck14; 06-21-2011 at 01:36 PM.

  3. #3
    Kelvin64's Avatar
    Kelvin64 is offline Master Gamer
    Join Date
    May 2009
    Posts
    8,515

    Default Re: Freerealms 2012: The Perfect World

    Oh, so this chapter isn't finished yet? Or did it take you 3 days to write just this? And, it's average so far, but I'm sure this is just the normal-day beginning, and then it will get to the cool stuff. Nice so far!
    *Points to trash* See? Seaside is already going downhill...

  4. #4
    TechDeck14's Avatar
    TechDeck14 is offline Master Gamer
    Join Date
    Feb 2010
    Posts
    3,654

    Default Re: Freerealms 2012: The Perfect World

    The whole chapter chapter will take 3 days to finish.

  5. #5
    TechDeck14's Avatar
    TechDeck14 is offline Master Gamer
    Join Date
    Feb 2010
    Posts
    3,654

    Default Re: Freerealms 2012: The Perfect World

    If you have any ideas on what to put let me know and I'll give you credit. I will finish chapter two in a couple of days.

  6. #6
    Kelvin64's Avatar
    Kelvin64 is offline Master Gamer
    Join Date
    May 2009
    Posts
    8,515

    Default Re: Freerealms 2012: The Perfect World

    Quote Originally Posted by TechDeck14 View Post
    If you have any ideas on what to put let me know and I'll give you credit. I will finish chapter two in a couple of days.
    No ideas, I don't really know what you plan to do with this story. Good luck, though! Oh, and chapter one says chapter two on it.

  7. #7
    TechDeck14's Avatar
    TechDeck14 is offline Master Gamer
    Join Date
    Feb 2010
    Posts
    3,654

    Default Re: Freerealms 2012: The Perfect World

    Thanks for letting me know!

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •