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    Default Fate and Destiny ~~~ A Story by Amanda. :P

    Fate and Destiny.
    Chapter 1: A Dragon Animoid.

    This story begins with a common girl, named Amanda. Although she's not very common, she has a very common life. Amanda just happens to be a very rare Animoid. An Animoid is a human, that has part of an animal inside. Amanda is a dragon Animoid, which is the most rare Animoid. An Animoid has animals part, such as tails, wings, ears, eyes, and/or nose. Amanda has a long dragon tail, and 40 foot dragon wings. Here the story starts:
    "I'm off to school, mom!" Amanda shouts through the house, flinging her backpack over her shoulder. She bends over, and grabs a book, titled "Friendly Fire"
    "Alright!" Her mom says. Amanda walks out the door, and closes it behind her. She hops on her bike, and starts peddling.
    5 minutes later...

    "Darn.." Amanda says, "I'm late!" Amanda quickly hops off her bike, allowing it to fall to the ground. She sprints to the doors of the school, and runs in, suddenly halting to a stop. The halls were empty except for a few papers. "Aw, man.." She mutters. She looks at her watch. "Seven thirty...." She says. She runs down the hall, and turns the corner. She ends up at the 10th grade door. She grips the knob, and turns it. She pushes the door open, quietly, and enters the room.
    "Good morning, Amanda." Her teacher, Mrs. Cronaloid, says. "Sorry I'm late, Mrs. C." Amanda says, slightly embaressed. "Take your seat." Mrs. Cronaloid says.
    "Yes Ma'am.." Amanda mutters. She sits down at a desk, in the front row.

    "Okay class, we have a new student coming in today," Mrs. Conaloid continues.
    "Come on in, Ella." She says. After she said that, a petite little girl, just a little smaller then Amanda, walks in. "Class, this is Ella Sparkleflower." Mrs. Cronaloid says. Instantly Amanda knew she would become good friends with Ella. "We have an extra desk here, who would like to sit next to Ella?" Mrs. Cronaloid asks. Amanda raises her hand. Mrs. Cronaloid points towards Amanda. "Would you like to get the desk for Ella?" Mrs. Cronaloid asks. "Sure thing, Mrs. C." Amanda replies. She stands up, and walks over to the desk. She grips the desk with one hand, and drags it over next to her own desk. She alines it with her own desk. She looks at Ella, and gestures towards the desk. Ella walks towards the desk and sits down. She sets her backpack down next to her.
    7 hours later..

    The school bell rings, and everyone grabs their backpack, and flings them over their shoulders. They all rush out of the room, leaving Amanda, and Ella, in the room. "Almost ready?" Amanda asks Ella. "Yep, I'm ready." Ella replies, picking up her bookbag. She slips it over her shoulder. "Let's go." Ella says. They both walk out of the classroom, and walk down the hallway, towards the doors. "Wanna come to my house?" Amanda asks Ella. "Sure. Let me call my mom, first." "Same here."
    They both call their moms, and they both say yes. "Kay. Come on." Amanda says, walking out the door, holding the door open for Ella. "Got your bike here?" Amanda asks. "Yup." Ella replies. They hop on their bikes, and start peddling.
    8 minutes later...
    "Mom! We're home!" Amanda shouts, walking in the door.
    "Alright! I'm in the kitchen making some food!"
    "I thought I smelled food." Ella tells Amanda's mom.
    "C'mon. I'll introduce you to my mom." Amanda says.
    They walk into the kitchen, and walk up behind Amanda's mom.
    Amanda taps on her mom's shoulder. "Wanna meet Ella?" She asks.
    "Oh gosh, where's my manners!" Her mom says. She turns around, and dusts her hands off on her apron. She shakes hands with Ella. "I"m Kyra."
    "I'm Ella."
    "We'll be in my room." Amanda says, and walks to her room, with Ella trailing behind her.
    They walk into the room.

    "Okay, please don't be afraid," Amanda says, "But I'm the rarest Animoid.." She closes the door behind her.
    "Serious? A dragon animoid?!" Ella gasps.
    "Yup.." Amanda admits.
    "I just happen to be an Animoid, too.." Ella replies.
    "Which Animoid?" Amanda asks.
    "Bunny.." Ella says.
    "Aw! A bunny? Cute!" Amanda exclaims.
    "Yup.." Ella says, blushing.
    ---------------------Tell me what you think. -------------------------------
    I'm going to post character forms, of what the characters are/look like.
    My internet has been out for quite a while now, so I won't be able to get on.
    ~~Amanda at the Library.
    I feel like that cat right now.


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    Default Re: Fate and Destiny ~~~ A Story by Amanda. :P

    Great story!

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    Default Re: Fate and Destiny ~~~ A Story by Amanda. :P

    Wow This is very neat Thumbs Up!

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    Default Re: Fate and Destiny ~~~ A Story by Amanda. :P

    Quote Originally Posted by Rosierulez View Post
    Great story!
    ^_^ Thanks, Rosie!
    Quote Originally Posted by trish19 View Post
    Wow This is very neat Thumbs Up!
    Thank you! ^_^ I just hope Ella posts.. .-.
    My internet has been out for quite a while now, so I won't be able to get on.
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    nice story amanda ^_^

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    Default Re: Fate and Destiny ~~~ A Story by Amanda. :P

    YIPPEE!!!!!!
    I love bunnehs, yes i do. I love bunnehs, don't do you!?
    I'm a bunneh princess, yay me! I'm a bunneh princess, don't you see?
    I Looooooooooooooooooove, loooooooooooooooooooooooove your story. I'm so happy you made me a bunny!!!!


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    Default Re: Fate and Destiny ~~~ A Story by Amanda. :P

    By the way, i found a perfect picture of what my character could look like!
    (If you didn't get the hint in my last post already )


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    Default Re: Fate and Destiny ~~~ A Story by Amanda. :P

    Quote Originally Posted by Ella Sparkleflower View Post
    By the way, i found a perfect picture of what my character could look like!
    (If you didn't get the hint in my last post already )

    Perfect. I just wish her shirt was longer. I could probably edit it when I get back from vacation, I'll see if I can edit it.
    My internet has been out for quite a while now, so I won't be able to get on.
    ~~Amanda at the Library.
    I feel like that cat right now.


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    Second part of the first chapter.

    They both start doing their homework. Amanda taps her lip with her pencil.
    "Eighty-five times ninety-five, devided by thrity-nine.." Amanda mutters.
    "I hate homework. Let's do it later." Ella suggests, while finishing a problem.
    "Alright." Amanda says, and sets her math book down.
    "So, what do you wanna do?" Ella asks, while tossing a stuffed animal.
    "Don't know.." Amanda replies.
    Amanda's mom suddenly walks into the room.
    "Girls, I made some food, want some?" Kyra asks.
    "Sure, what'cha got?" Amanda replies.
    "Some... Angel hair el pasta in tomato sauce." Kyra tell them, while pushing a cart into the room. She grabs two plates and sets them on the top of the cart. She grabs a pot, with long, stringy nooddles inside, from the bottom of the cart, and sets it on the top. She grabs a jar of tomato sauce, and sets it on the top. She opens the jar, and pours it into the pot. She mixes it around, with a long wooden spoon. She uses the spoon to scoup up some noodles and sets the noodles on each plate. SHe puts a fork on each plate, and hands a plate to each of the girls.
    "Mm. Looks yummy." Amanda and Ella say.

    As they finish their food, a lound banging sounds.
    "Who's there?!" Amanda screams, slightly frightened.
    "FBI! Open up!" A man with a booming voice shouts back.
    Amanda runs over and looks throught the peep hole, and sees three men in black tuxedoes. She unlocks the door, and opens it. "What do you want?" She asks.
    "Are you Amanda Precioussaber?" One of the man asks.
    "Yes. Why?" Amanda gently, but firmly says.
    "You're coming with us.." Another one says.
    "What?! No way! I'm not coming with you!" Amanda shouts at them.
    "Oh yes you are!" The first man replies.
    One of them grabs Amanda by the arm, and attempts to pull her out the door, and succeeds. "Ella! Get my mom!" Amanda shouts.
    No answer.
    "It's no use. We already got them in the van." The man replies.
    Amanda straightens her wings, and starts flapping them.
    "Let me GO!!!" She screams. Just then black fire appears, surrounding her feet.
    "She's angry! Let her go!" Ella shouts through the open van window.
    "Back out, bunny girl!" He shouts at Ella.
    Amanda screams, and her eyes turn pure white.
    All three of the men grab Amanda, and pick her up. They throw her into the van.
    They drive off.
    1 hour later....

    They arrive at a scientist lab.
    "Test these two girls. They're very powerful.." One of the man tells a scientist.
    "Yes sir." The scientist replies. "Come with me girls." He says.
    Amanda and Ella follow him. "Why am I here?" Amanda asks the scientist.
    "Just some simple tests." He answers.
    My internet has been out for quite a while now, so I won't be able to get on.
    ~~Amanda at the Library.
    I feel like that cat right now.


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    Default Re: Fate and Destiny ~~~ A Story by Amanda. :P

    Awesome so far! I can't wait to read more!
    And how about a small chapter beginer? I wanna see some action! This is what i imagine, then you can choose if you want to use it as a beginner or not, just as an insparation.

    Ella's face went red. She clearly wanted to go home. "LET US GO!" She screams, Her entire body turned flashes of pink and white.
    "Woah! Get her under control!" A man in a lab coat yells. But it was too late. Ella was already undergoing her phase. Her hair raised up and the tiny black bows which tied braids popped right out. She jumped up, and a large pink bow, larger than the black ones appeared right on the top of her head. A pink collar with a golden pendant suddenly flew on her neck. Amanda ran towards Ella and grasped her arm.
    "Calm down!" The man yelled, raising a tranqualizing gun.
    "Don't you dare--Ooooohhh....." They both fell to the floor, asleep.




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