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    Icon2 Does this sound good?

    I made this For the God Poseidon...It might confuse you if you have not yet read the books 8D Percy Jackson books i might add hehe

    If you could gaze across the sea,
    like never before,
    and if you believe,
    the waves start at the core,
    and your a hundred miles away,
    on the 600th floor,
    what would you say? what would you say..
    What if your little son,
    could never hug you tight,
    and he had nightmares,
    almost every night,
    and you knew you could help,
    but he doesn't know you love him,
    and the world just keeps crashin' like a tidle wave...The world just keeps crashin' like a tidle wave...
    The world just keeps crashin'.....

    Do you like it! 8D
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    Default Re: Does this sound good?

    yes very nice...sad but nice

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    Default Re: Does this sound good?

    Very Nice :] Love it

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    Thx! I am a poet if you know. But yes thats just how Poseidon's And Percy's life is, I mean Percy doesn't know his father loves him, But Poseidon Can never come near him at all, he can't call him, he can't hug him, or anything due to him being a God. So it is very sad. But Poseidon already knows Percy is a mistake, and Percy Kind of hates him for thinking that....Sad world, Sad faces....8(
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    Default Re: Does this sound good?

    Me being a poet/songwriter, you are much better than I am.
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    Default Re: Does this sound good?

    OMG Zoey you really think so? (pssssst i can sing, dance, and act) call me a show off but i can lol
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    Default Re: Does this sound good?

    very nice and rhyming too lol
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    Sad and nice i liked it thou

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