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    Icon7 Diary of a small town girl

    May 1,

    Just another normal day. Got out of school early to go to the dentist. Apparently I need braces.

    May 2,

    The end of the school year is approaching and I have no idea what I'm going to do. Everybody already knows everybody as this town is so darn small so friends are not an issue. But the high school here seems really scary. The teacher I would have for math is my neighbor but she hates me. Ever since I was 6 and accidentally broke her window with my soccer ball. I heard she gives out a TON of homework.

    May 3,

    Hannah, my best friend in the whole world got mad at me today. For no reason at all. She's been acting weird lately. Really sensitive about EVERYTHING. She's also been hanging out with Ellie and Toryn, who we hate. I don't know what her deal is. I hope she grows out of it over the summer. I don't think I could deal with this as an innocent freshman in high school.




    Do you think I should continue?

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    Default Re: Diary of a small town girl

    i think you should if you wanna
    Im back! :3

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    Default Re: Diary of a small town girl

    How do you edit the post?

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    Default Re: Diary of a small town girl

    there should be a Edit button at the bottom of your original post =)

    Be yourself.. Imitation is Suicide!

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    Default Re: Diary of a small town girl

    you can't edit it until u have 10 posts
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    Default Re: Diary of a small town girl

    you do i didnt know that lol
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    Icon3 Re: Diary of a small town girl

    Its a really great start. You should continue writing if it makes you happyI suggest adding some adjectives in so the readers are better able to get a feel for the story but other than that, nice job.

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