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    Icon11 The dark world part2 the mystic city :D

    John got up and ran as fast as he could. He ran to a house and shut the door behind him.8/ The houses interior was to destroyed to see what color it was painted! "John is it you?"a familar voice whispered. Sam then walked out of the shadows and hugged John. "it is you i'm so glad to see you..." but before sam could finish the monster broke down the old door. John grabbed a pipe on the floor as fast as he could. He then beated up the monster with the pipe till it suddenly turned to dust. "were gonna need this!" John said to Sam.
    Next time part 3 the search for mary plz comment and rate


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    Default Re: The dark world part2 the mystic city :D

    The smilies kind of lessen the effect of a good story lol. If you improve your spelling and grammar a bit, this would be book-worthy. Well, short story-worthy. It is rather short.
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    Default Re: The dark world part2 the mystic city :D

    there will be like thirty parts and thank you parts are very short because im doing this on my wii witch hurts your thumbs after like 2 sentences
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    Default Re: The dark world part2 the mystic city :D

    pretty good. I'll rate it three stars.

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    Default Re: The dark world part2 the mystic city :D

    thank you


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    Default Re: The dark world part2 the mystic city :D

    On your Wii? Well, then, this is actually pretty long lol. It definitely takes me a while just to type a normal sentence on the Wii! Good work so far; keep it up .
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    Default Re: The dark world part2 the mystic city :D

    thank you my hand hurts now


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    Default Re: The dark world part2 the mystic city :D

    May not realease part 3 for a while....


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