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    Icon1 The Dark World Book 1:Chapter 1:the Hanted Hotel

    The Dark World will be even bette this time i am the main charecter!

    The Haunted Hotel: I Woke up and saw a strange figure walk past i got up as fast as possible and started running. i saw a strange light coming from room 505, i entered the room and saw a person siting in a corner on a very old rocking chair crying. i put my hand on the person. i couldnt belive what happened next the person dissapered into thin air and suddenly there was a piece of paper on the ground. when i read it it said "the johnson hotel" i was suddenly knocked out. there was a voice telling me to come when i woke up. i ran to the opening of the hotel i tryed to open the door but i wouldnt budge .i heard a voice say tom where are you really fast i ran into room 204 locked the door and started to cry wondering if i will ever get out of the johnson hotel. there was a knock on the door and i heard i voice say "LET ME IN PLEASE!" i opened the door i couldnt belive that john was here to i then quick shut door and locked it again then i jumped out the window making sure john was following.
    There will be more to this chapter please tell me what you think of my story so far!
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    Default Re: The Dark World Book 1:Chapter 1:the Hanted Hotel

    Awesome post some more!!
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    Default Re: The Dark World Book 1:Chapter 1:the Hanted Hotel

    ok i want to upload a picture i made for it


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    Default Re: The Dark World Book 1:Chapter 1:the Hanted Hotel

    kk..................
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    Default Re: The Dark World Book 1:Chapter 1:the Hanted Hotel

    I ADDED MORE!


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    Default Re: The Dark World Book 1:Chapter 1:the Hanted Hotel

    Looks good. Needs punctuation marks.
    "But I don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
    "Oh you can't help that," said the Cat: "we're all mad here. I'm mad, you're mad."
    "How do you know I'm mad?" said Alice.
    "You must be," said the Cat, "or you wouldn't have come here."



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    Default Re: The Dark World Book 1:Chapter 1:the Hanted Hotel

    oops thank you for telling me


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    Default Re: The Dark World Book 1:Chapter 1:the Hanted Hotel

    Still awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Default Re: The Dark World Book 1:Chapter 1:the Hanted Hotel

    Never said it wasn't
    "But I don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
    "Oh you can't help that," said the Cat: "we're all mad here. I'm mad, you're mad."
    "How do you know I'm mad?" said Alice.
    "You must be," said the Cat, "or you wouldn't have come here."



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