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    Icon1 Current in the Sky

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    I walk through the open doors,
    Wishing that i could fly,
    No limits in the air,
    Never saying Good-Bye,
    I look at it,
    The Current in the sky.
    Watch the clouds slowly move,
    Wish i could be up there,
    Surfing through the Clouds,
    Floating Through the air,
    i look at it,
    The current in the sky...
    Oh when the rain falls,
    I'll be there,
    when the rain stops,
    i'll Be there,
    When the wind blows,
    i'll be there,
    when the wind slows,
    i'll be there...
    Theres not much of the sky to be run,
    just to feel the sun..
    Where the sun sets meet me there,
    Because we're traveling in the current of the air.

    Hehe 8D
    I don't run with the current of the water, i run with the current of the air.

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    Default Re: Current in the Sky

    That is a lovely poem...perhaps song?
    Nothing is permanent.

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    Default Re: Current in the Sky

    Very nicely done. Your poem would also make great song lyrics if you can find the right music.
    When you share joy you double it.
    When you share sorrow you cut it in half.

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    Default Re: Current in the Sky

    Quote Originally Posted by pavana View Post
    Very nicely done. Your poem would also make great song lyrics if you can find the right music.
    Yes ... it seems like a good choice for a song because of the repetition of certain lines .

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