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Title: A Christmas Miracle ( Chapter 1-2 )

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    Default Re: A Christmas Miracle

    *nods*

    Your lovely Mommeh is coming up with ideas for the 3rd. ;-;

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    Default Re: A Christmas Miracle ( Chapter 1-2 )

    This was really good and descriptive. Loved it!

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    Default Re: A Christmas Miracle ( Chapter 1-2 )

    Thank you very much dear! ^^

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    Default Re: A Christmas Miracle ( Chapter 1-2 )

    I loved it! Some minor grammar errors, but other than that, it's pretty good. I hope you make more!
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    Default Re: A Christmas Miracle ( Chapter 1-2 )

    Thanks! I have Chapter 3 up currently and may do Ch. 4 tomorrow or Monday.

    I wouldn't mind also if you PM'ed me on the grammar errors you found. I love people looking over my writing and looking for mistakes I missed.

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    Default Re: A Christmas Miracle ( Chapter 1-2 )

    Oh, i'll be sure to read chapter 3! And ah, can't wait for that

    Sure thing! I'll get started on that now. ^^
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    Default Re: A Christmas Miracle ( Chapter 1-2 )

    Amazing stuff, I notice 3 and 4 are also up so I'm going to go read them now.

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