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    Default ~A bird's eye view~

    Bird’s eye view


    Sabrina grabbed onto the rope, her eyes bold with fright. Her hands were grasped so tight to the rope she could feel the threads etch a pattern into her palms. She swallowed hard then let go, pushing off the ledge with a great amount of energy. She looked at the waterfall, crystal clear water and beautiful landscape around it. She stared in awe before knowing her hands were starting to slip. She quickly tightened her grip again, breathing heavily. She looked down whimpering at the height. She spotted a colorful school of fish swim by below her, a sea turtle close by. It was truly a bird’s eye view. She waved her feet in the air. Before she knew it she was heading back for the ledge. She shook her head unable to get the directions of how to stick the landing straight. Creeping closer and closer she decided she would come up with her own way. She closed her eyes and waited for the impact. It never came.
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    Chapter 2
    Her eyes still closed, she snapped them open. “Oh my…!” She was cut off, breathless of words. She was falling, falling at 100 miles per hour for all she knew. All it took was one good smack against the water and she was done. Shatter to a million pieces and eaten by some wild animal. She quickly looked up. The rope had snapped. BANG! She hit the water like a pancake against the pan. It was terrible. Had she died? No, she wouldn’t be able to think if she had died. She didn’t feel any pain. If she was alive, where the heck was she? She quickly looked around pitch black covered the air. She gave it a second thought “Maybe I am dead….” She began to weep, unsure if her question was ever going to be answered. “Wait shouldn’t I be underwater?” She took a deep breath. Air. Her feet weren’t touching anything solid though. She let out a loud scream, only to be answered by her own echoes.

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    Default Re: ~A bird's eye view~

    Really great story so far!
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    Chapter 3
    Unable to move, she screamed and hollered restlessly. Afraid she might never be found, a bright light appeared out of nowhere, getting brighter and brighter the closer it came. She had to squint her eyes to block out the extreme rays of light pouring into the space. No matter how bright it got all she could see of her surroundings was black. The lack of protection made her dizzy. She was suddenly sucked forward, into a world she was never soon to forget.

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